Could do with refining
Some of the graphics were a little shabby, but then I was impressed with others, such as the explosion early on, I thought that was well done. As for sound, some of it's quite difficult to hear, and a tad childish. Although it's clear you have some skill with animation and drawing, it looks a bit like you've rushed this, so maybe consider reworking the graphics and sound. I'd also like to see a title that doesn't make me immediately think of Star Wars.
thanks , at least one person that understands that that was a prewiev, thnx (-:
I want to see more
If you're wondering why the ratings above are so low, I'd just like to see this as an actual piece. It's nice you want to share your in-production stuff with us, but I'd prefer to see it finished. Just on what I saw there, however: the music was a little bit quiet, and the graphics seemed to contrast with each other quite a bit, you might need to consider bridging that gap in some way to give the final movie a well-rounded style.
I know, I should have put something at the end like: Coming Soon or something, but quite understandable for the low mark. But do keep a eye out for the full cartoon very soon.
Worth waking the dead for...
I absolutely loved that! Though I must admit, at times it TOO closely resembled Shaun Of The Dead, the original work in it shone through ultimately. It had me laughing out loud, especially; "You want some tea and crumpets, lads?"
Agh! Those voices!!!
I liked the art, that was great, the concept too, was okay. Maybe the humour lingered too long in parts... but that's not why I'm here writing this. I just could not stand those voices... I don't know, maybe it's just me... I have a fear of helium or something... but those voices make me want to kill myself. Now that that's off my chest... it was essentially fine, apart from the voices...
Amusing... but short
It was good... and I can empathise with this... I've heard (from my girlfriend) what uni tutors are like. I'd have liked it even more if it had a longer story to it. Only other thing I have against it is the sound... it was too quiet to start with. The style was good, I loved the way your characters are drawn.
an amusing bit of flash, it's good to see there's still some thought and REAL humour going into flash movies
I loved that! The eye thing, GREAT!!! Hysteria never hurt so much!
I couldn't hear the red robot's voice, maybe you should subtitle it?
tnx for the advice. I added subtitles.
and nothing occured to you whilst coming up with this plan? Maybe the fact that it's already a feature film with no need of badly voiced and animated versions of itself? I gave you a 1 on interactivity due to the button at the very start... congratulations
Very interesting to be sure
Seems a lot like how I feel... there was always something going slightly wrong for somebody in each animation. I liked the sketch pose stickman with the gun most. Good work
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